Tim and I are really getting our heads into "The August Thorn". Long story short...

I started an online OGN back around the turn of the millenium. I've had the basic premise and characters since '95. I kind of just leaped into it without as much planning as it deserved. Chalk that up to youthful enthusiasm.

I'm going to relaunch in the future. This time with fully fleshed out characters and detailed plots. New design to the site too. More thoughtful, less goth.

My good friend Tim [link] has been has been in on the story since the beginning and has been a great sounding board for my ideas. He is also going to be helping me with the character designs.

The site for the story is [link]

The point to all of this is...we are going to be putting up a lot of ideas. I would appreciate constructive feedback. What works, what doesn't, etc.

Thanks in advance.